Flash Narrative: May 8, 1945, A Day One Comments On

Flash Narrative Tuesday is a way to share my current work in progress, a book based on the Great Plains diaries of my great-aunt Hattie, which she kept from 1920-1957. For more background information on the project, go here.

Churchill waving at crowds

Churchill waving to crowds at Whitehall, London on the day he announced the war with Germany had been won, 8 May 1945

This week’s narrative takes a bit of a new turn. I’ve always been a big fan of Karen Hesse’s Out of the Dust, a work of historical fiction for children (and adults) told through poetry. I thought it would be fun to allow Hattie to be a poet.



May 8, 1945: A Day One Comments On

The day began like any other in early
May, the morning sun cast shadows long
The south wind close, a frantic whisper old and
New, until at eight a.m. when President
Harry Truman announced on this day, his birthday
That Germany had quit the war, having surrendered
In a little red school house in France, Eisenhower’s
Headquarters—”This is a solemn but glorious hour”
Churchill in England and King George the Sixth spoke
I heard them over the radio, London and Paris
Rejoice, but solemn prayers all instead of
Wild stuff, for we lost so many lives
This is a day one comments on. V. E. Day

Hattie's entry for May 8, 1945

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4 Responses to “Flash Narrative: May 8, 1945, A Day One Comments On”

  1. littlejl June 1, 2011 at 7:52 pm #

    Very well done.

    • Lisa June 2, 2011 at 9:17 am #

      Thank you. :D It was fun to write.

  2. Christi Craig June 3, 2011 at 4:16 pm #

    Lisa, I love what you’ve done with this selection, especially how you include a photo of the original. And, the title is perfect!

    • Lisa June 8, 2011 at 6:34 am #

      Christi, thank you! I really enjoy delving into the history behind her entries.

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